It was fun, I even managed to reach the end.
Game had some creepy atmosphere, but I think in some parts it was too long. For example going to house then going back, then again.
I also didn't understood why we collect books?
When walking down the school corridor you could add screamer or just something to appear in a window or in class room when player tries to peek inside.
Also you could add some spooky elements in house. it's very claustrophobic but it's not used in any way.
Overall good game, keep up.
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Hey thank you so much for the feedback! I agree the parts on walking back and forth is too long and I'm planning to add more interactions along the way so it feels like it's building up the game rather than just wasting time.
For the book, ignore it. It's just my sudden stupid idea. There are some spooky elements planned though I'm working on the next few scenes and I'll work on the additional details later!