Good production for this track, sounds really epic, very fitting for the theme. Would've loved to hear some more variation on the melody before the bridge, and the track does feel a bit robotic, it feels like you stacked repeated layers and lacks natural flow between the part. subtle variations in various elements can help remedy this problem.
Your orchestration itself is great and the track sounds amazing still. Godpseed !
Melody clarity 5/5
Melody Impact 5/5
Composition 3/5 (The structure was simple but effective. Exposition, development, bridge, climax and conclusion, however as I pointed out I would've loved that the melody develops a bit more before the bridge)
Listenability 4/5 (The track sounds great and pleasant despite the robotic feeling I mentionned)
Correlation to theme 5/5 (The lack of description makes it difficult to rate, however it does sound epic so I'd rather give a high rating in this category)