I played your game and is working well, here is my feedback...
- good layout and ui is working great
- i like the music but it is a little bit repetitive
- on screen buttons in the corner to toggle music, and bring up menu would be good
- really cool how sound effects are timed with the story
- i think you could do some revision to edit down the text a bit but it was an interesting story
- a few choices would really help to get player invested