Yo Noah, what a cool track you've tried, and especially for the first time attempting these types of drums. I loved the opening to the track and I think over the course it kind of loses steam a bit, I think some more dynamic and interesting textures in the slower moments and then rhythmic interest in the fast paced drum sections could've helped. The melody also doesn't necessary feel like the focus here, but I like the sounds and ideas you've played with here a lot!