Great track, loved the buildup. Production is clean, although it does sound a bit stiff, perhaps lacking some nuance or some other form of variation whether it be in timbre or rhythm, because it does kinda feel robotic. Also lack some risers or other ear candy in my opinion, and the production ends up somewhat underwhelming.
Melody clarity 5/5 (I like that multiple instruments pass the melody to each other)
Melody impact 4/5 (The melody itself is very verbose and there's a lot of it, constantly, which makes it difficult to remember as a motif)
Composition 3/5
Listenability 3/5
Correlation to theme 2/5 (Would've loved a more precise subject rather than a general theme, makes it harder to see the connection to the theme)