I gotta start with the obvious : as other pointed out, this track barely relates to the theme of the jam.
However I have to praise the creative (and good-sounding) orchestration, the track sounds full and fun, it sounds dynamic, maybe a bit too stiff (the lack of nuance does make it sound amateur). For a beginner it's honestly impressive, I urge you to continue making music. Do make use of more nuance, and try to hum your melodies as you write them, it really helps them make more memorable.
Melody clarity 5/5
Melody impact 3/5
Composition 3/5 (the track is good, but there isn't much development, which is a point I consider important in a melody focused jam - not making just the melody but showing how you use it to tell a story)
Listenability 3/5
Correlation to theme 1/5