I must say, this game was quite the pleasant surprise to discover and it's a shame that it slid under my radar for so long. Definitely one of my favorite WIP itch.io NSFW projects standing together with MonCurse and MonGirlDreams now.
Obviously if I'd be judging it like one would judge a complete game, i wouldn't rate it highly. Many TFs are using the default dialogue lines for a lot of different situations and events in which they certainly shouldn't, the system that would make other characters retaliate against you once you "attack" their faction/allies is pretty much non-existent, i think i remember encountering a visual bug or two in the gallery (and another gallery bug that crashes your game while viewing Matthias' CGs before unlocking them) and in general there's just an overwhelming sense of "incompleteness" so to speak (yada yada, let's get to the part where i actually praise it for something).
But what's already here is very promising, and what i assume is the scope that this project is going for in terms of accounting for your actions and the variety of TFs in general is certainly... Grand. I don't even know whether i want to see a full spreadsheet/map of all the dialogue changes and little things and outcomes that change with your decisions and different TFs, or how it might look when the game is actually finished as i fear that it might become a seizure hazard at that point. With all of this said, it is no surprise that it is in the state it currently is. Honestly the biggest surprise to me is the fact that it is receiving monthly updates without a single hefty delay. Hopefully the developers aren't overworking themselves.
The writing certainly feels competent, good, maybe even great at times. Might be better than I'm making it out to be, never can tell with games like this as it feels like i might have a possibly unfounded predisposition to not taking the writing in them that seriously. The art is in the area of "great" for me, though some art does look... Weird? Actually when i think about it, it's mostly just Tessa... Maybe it's the fact that i just hate Tessa.
Overall, what a neat thing this is. The further progress in development of which i eagerly am looking forward to.
Sidenote: This shall probably fall on deaf ears, or maybe this suggestion would get fulfilled in some form regardless of its existence here, but painter Elami with caretaker personality might benefit from some minor dialogue tweaks to incorporate her being both a painter and a caretaker of an orphanage, as there seemingly is no difference between her and the base form (though that might be just because her harem TFs are the most recent additions to the pool as of now). Maybe something about her treating her painting as a hobby and only sometimes teaching it to the kids. Maybe even her reminiscing of some of the kids who took an especial interest in the craft and saying something about how talented all of them are and Lewis saying in return that that is all thanks to her guidance... Ahem, I'm sure Sylvie probably has a better idea for this than i do anyway.