Fantastic atmosphere!
The melody is also nice, maybe the laid back feel of the arrangement is what made the melody feel less memorable to some people but for me it was really nice, but I do have a bit of a personal bias towards folky sounding stuff 😅
I'd wager a guess if this had been the same material and melodies but with a more energetic arrangement, people would've thought it was more memorable just because of the more energetic feel 😄
The presentation/production quality was really great with the project page info and the excellent melody analysis video, will probably have to remember to do a similar thing if there is ever a Melody Jam #2
For me this was really great stuff, good work!