Great idea making a leitmotif kind of thing, the sounds and vibe fit perfectly to an astral weapon. I feel that there is a big discrepancy in the low end between the two tracks, either tone down that in the first track, or increase it in the other one, or do both XD. Was waiting for a big burst of low energy in the second one, it felt a bit thin, it might also be a bit quieter.
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Yo Deadric thanks so much for the comment. Tried hard to have that leitmotif effect for a melody jam i thought it would work, so im happy u appreciate that. I get what you're saying - I wanted the first track to feel heavier naturally than the second so i think thats why i intended for the low end to be so prominent. However, I did rush the second track as time was super tight for me which meant it wasn't exactly as I wanted, so I also agree that better balancing on the second track was required - I also didnt have time to properly master track 2 which is why it's quieter overall. Appreciate the feedback, can take it onboard, and hopefully if i can get more time i can rly focus on those bits.