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Damn, when i started to play this i did not expect it to be PEAK FICTION!!! The story, the background lore, the characters, the interactions... although it starts a bit slow, this game is not afraid of making you truly feel. At times it can be funny, sweet, comfy; at others it can be heart-wrenching, nerve-wracking...and of course, horny. Very horny. Definitely recommending this!! Here are some thoughts/suggestions (sorry for wall of text): 

SPOILERS BELOW

- sfx and/or moans during sex scenes would be really nice to have, though i'm aware that it would be almost impossible to implement them at this point considering the sheer amount of characters and scenes 😞

- i find that some of the more action-oriented sequences are a bit confusing and hard to follow. they're not too bad but i think it would be neat to have some renders captured with wider, zoomed-out shots

- i would have loved it if the first full sex scene with gloria (the one right after getting back together) was a unique scene instead of the nightly repeatable event. the flashback to 300 years ago that explains what happened between MC and gloria and the following conversation is imo the best emotional payoff in the game (so far :p) so i think a unique scene + bed talk would be a great way to cap it off

- this may be a big ask but it would be even better if you could apply the previous point to lily and violet (and abigail?). i know i was gushing about gloria just now but lily is actually my favorite lol

- i hope yall don't chop my balls off for this but i would really like it if there were other ways of increasing lust points for the girls. please understand that i'm aware a big draw of the game is the control/hypno play and i'm fine with that but i think it wouldn't be too complicated to add an option to, instead of controlling a character, simply hang out with them, screen fades to black (or plays one random render of that character), time of day passes, and get +1 lust. that said, i know very little about game development so i apologize if i'm wrong 

Alright, sorry again for the wall of text. I think it goes without saying but i REALLY enjoyed the game and i am beyond excited for future content! Looking forward to seeing where the plot takes us and i wish you good luck in development ❤️ 

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Story is peak fr

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Thanks buddy  (-ω-ゞ

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- Working with other people are scary ...

- More zoomed out fight scene, got it. Was trying some dynamic camera angle lol. 

= As for the scenes I prefer having them repeatable for easy access, but I will try to make the quest that contain them extra special. 

- When I add future corruption stages, I will make the lust point easier to increase to reduce the segg spam. 

Thanks for the detailed feedback my dude, I wish you good luck in life so you can enjoy even more LS  (-ω-ゞ

 

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Thank you thank you! Regarding working with others, are you talking about commissioning VA work? Idk if you've considered it but you can get premade voice packs from sites like patreon and freesound. And some of them are even free as long as you credit the author, such as lecheryamoreva's free pack here on itchio :) just thought i'd mention it in case you didn't know! 

In case you (and anyone else reading this) are interested, an itchio avn i played recently that i thought had really good sfx design is "Inanna Revenge"

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premade are nice but they will be out of sync with the animation sadly, would be pretty weird