I keep mouseclicking on the dialogue box and it doesn't display the next dialogue line, it's pretty confusing
Cool animations at the start of the demo and in the backgrounds as well. Nice art style, it looks refreshing
The story is a little hard to follow as is, I think adding some SFX would help, or maybe having only the current dialogue line displayed in the dialogue box? I'm not used to the way it works right now
Lots of "What" instead of "Why" and that type of typos. CEO's mask comes off when we're talking outside with him when you ask "What do you think of the team?"
I really like the character design, they all look different from each other, there are some inconsistencies from one version of the character to another, like Rimahan's outline is thick when wearing the mask, and thick on the other sprites. Same thing with Massieu's shadow, it changes between the "tongue out" sprite and the other ones
Your fullscreen CGs are really cool, hope we see more of those going forward!!
The load function doesn't seem to work properly, I loaded a save I made from a dialogue, and it loaded the "navigation" screen. I couldn't load any dialogue from here