Shame you didn't upload the whole thing with the score to musescore's website, would've been nice to listen along with the score, but I understand if you don't want to share the whole score publicly there.
Like others have mentioned the mix feels a bit dry, or should I say really close? with the feel of the track being very fantasy forest music-ish to me, it got me wondering how this would feel with the whole ensemble sounding a bit further away and in a large hall setting to really give it that feel of grandeur the material feels like it deserves (to me at least 😉) .
Feels very much the music that plays under the narration telling the story of the Weapon Of Legend, so you nailed the theme nicely for me.
Good work!