Feels a bit overtly happy and calm to really fit the Weapon Of Legend theme to me.
Melody feels nice, you could maybe have some little pauses in the phrases at parts since it kinda feels like on long sentence. The most natural way for feeling those spots is just trying to sing, hum, or whistle the melody and you probably will naturally feel the spots where to pause a bit while performing it yourself.
Arrangement/orchestration wise it would've been cool to have a more drastic change than just dropping the strings at 0:55,since rest of the accompaniment keeps playing the same it doesn't really feel a big of a shift, having the other accompaniment parts change too would've made the change to the calmer part feel more powerful.
Just my subjective feels, but still good stuff!