Maybe the track could've gotten to the melodic a bit sooner as this is a Melody focused jam, and over half of the track is more in the ambient cinematic orchestra side without much melodic material.
But when the melody finally comes it's really nice! One thing though as it is currently is that its the same melody repeated twice pretty much verbatim, I'd maybe recommend having the first time around end on a downwards motion instead of the rising one currently, since it feels a bit jumpy as it jumps back down to the start on the repeat and then having that exact rising motion repeated again at the end of the repeat makes it feel a bit less impactful, but if the rising motion is only at the end of the repeat that would really feel like the final high point of the melodic section that then goes back to the mellower ambient stuff.
Just my subjective feelings about it, but still really good work!