I think this track is excellent. The use of sounds, the texture, the ending are all stellar. I love the vocal sounds and the swells you've used, and the saturated deterioration at the end sounds soooo good.
I think the melody kind of takes a backseat, it's definitely there especially towards the end, but there is kind of this positive problem where the rest of the track is so well done it almost overshadows the melody itself.
Melody Clarity 4/5
The melody is quite discernable in my opinion. It's stays in my head after listening, which is a good thing!
Melody Impact 3/5
I feel like it's more of a part of the overall texture of the track, and doesn't stick out as a strong theme if that makes sense. The track itself is very impactful but the melody doesn't necessarily carry the impact. The ending is extremely good though! I can't stress that enough.
Composition 5/5
Overall the track is put together super well. The elements come together flawlessly, and the track has a real sense of development. I especially like the use of vocals/choir and distortion here.
Listenability 5/5
Very close to being my favorite track to listen to so far.
Correlation to Theme 3/5
This one is difficult. I get what you were going for, not sure if it lands in terms of the overall theme of this jam. So, I guess it correlates very well to your own personal theme, but maybe not to the jam itself if that makes sense?
One of my favorites so far, you did an amazing job with this! I almost feel like I want give this a higher score, but I'm trying my best to stay as honest as I can with the ratings. I hope my excitement for this track came through anyway.