Had goosebumps listening to this ! The emotion and buildup were well conveyed, congrats on that. Great balance between orchestral and electronic elements, great narration. Love how you included this bird ambience in this.
Only downside I see are the trombones that have very sharp sforzandos, which make their melody difficult to listen. Some things were way louder than they needed to be (like the bass drop and the trombones sometimes)
May I ask how you did these percussions in the second trombone melody section ?
Melody clarity 5/5
Malody Impact 5/5
Composition 4/5
Listenability 4/5
Correlation to theme 5/5