That was so adorable!! What a wonderfully sweet little read -- it can be hard to capture a child's voice sometimes in writing, but I think you captured it super well! This was just a genuinely heartwarming little story, I have no notes! Wonderful job!
I'm super glad you were able to get your game fixed, by the way -- I remember seeing the fact you couldn't get it fixed when I was looking around after finishing my game and feeling super bad about it.