This reminds me a lot of some of the soundtrack from the Risk of Rain games. I think you have a really solid idea and melodic loop that would fit a game here. I am not a fan of the synth used for the guitar. Its a little bit too distorted and it sounds a little messy. I liked the space that develops towards the last half of the piece. It was a nice breath to let me process the first half of the song. I think if you put one of those towards the beginning after some of the guitar phrasing it would help the melody sink in a bit more.