I really liked the TANtatatataTAA! figure you have the cellos start playing at 0:30, but then the flutes come in and start playing the frankly less memorable/boring parts IMO and the cellos keep taking my attention away every time I hear them play the TANtatatataTAA! figure again in the background. I really wished you had latched onto that and used it more prominently for the melody.
Still, good work!