when mousing over a text option, there should be a better indication you're highlighting it. change the color?
in the first screen, Rimanah, Massieu and Made all speak. however, if you highlight the name of the speaker, it will change to their portrait. made spoke last, highlighting massieu changes the image to him. good idea, however if you move your mouse it creates a weird flickering. when you change a portrait, keep it changed until someone speaks or you mouse over another person
changing portraits in a bit flickery in general - something is off but i cant quite say what. maybe because both that and the text happens simultaneously, splitting focus? unknown..
ESLsms, just the worst
>Rimanah:
We are only there? --> There's only 3 of us? / It's only us three?
>What are the task? --> What is the task? / What are the tasks?
>Do you think the expedition going to sucess --> Do you think the expedition is going to succeed (two C's) / Do you think the expedition is going to be a success ? ( two C's)
>No, let meet your friend. ---> No, let's meet your friend.
> Who never? (when asked about what games they play in the big ship) i get the idea but nobody would ever nbame a game that way. the usual English name is 'Never have I ever' (since youll say 'Never have I ever done <thing>'
Massieu: Impressive; for a moment I thought you would cause a storm just talking. The radio 'specialis' and I are going for the instrument --> no idea what this is trying to say
Made:
Good, Sir Rimanah; later in the afternoon.... --> Sir Rimanah makes it sound like he's a knight in medieval times
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Kato's the best, Massieu is great too
Ceo's dialog in the Nomad camp is repeatable (only one I've seen that was repeatable)
Ceo's shocked face is really, really weird. (When he says:L "That is all you can say? Nothing else?" )
Pare's "A fine tradition i shall continue." line made me laugh out loud, perfect, 10/10
>Massieu taps that
based
fun demo, no complaints. less weird English than before, interesting premise