Damn that is short. Personally I really dig the idea and there are glimpses of something that reminds me of something that could come out of a Bloodborne OST where that melody could go really well. However, compositionally the arrangement feels way to sparse for really shine on that. Also the melody does only repeat itself 2 times it neither creates any real impact nor create any other feeling or context outside of it establishing moment.
Arrangement wise bass and violins are creating a nice floaty bed to let the melody dance around like on a dark waltz. And with not having the Viola implemented there is enough room to expand on. While I really like the idea and approach this feels way to short and more like a first draft then an actual composition, that I would really like to hear since there are sparks of a cool idea.
Melody clarity: 3/5
Melody impact: 3/5
Composition: 2/5
Listenability: 3/5
Correlation of Theme: 3/5
To recap on the rating. This is mostly due to being too short and not creating a feeling of having an actual song to rate upon and not having other elements outside some strings and an Anvil sound in the beginning. Otherwise, it feels like it has any potential to actually score way higher.