Okay Evelyn running Miasma over fucking killed me lmao
I haven't tried everything yet but it's going to be 1am so that'll have to wait XD
I loved the art, I know you didn't have enough time to finish, but what's there is very good!
The writing had a good balance of humour and drama, I really enjoyed the writing so far and I'm looking forwards to playing more.
I think the sound needs a little work (some are VERY retro, others are more modern) but tbh SFX and music are witchcraft and rarely a priority when it comes to visual novels, so I don't blame you for focusing on the art and writing instead.
I'm glad I got in :D