Very solid composition.
My only feedback for this is that the melody is maybe not as memorable or "catchy" if you will. But the composition is generally very good and appropriate to what you were writing for.
I think I'll resume this melody-focused jam series. I also was surprised at how much I felt challenged to create a clear melody, even though I've written some clear melodies before. It's hard to do it on the spot, and sometimes they just come to you randomly.
Great work! :)