We noticed a couple more tiny typos/quibbles. I don't want to start a top-level thread for them, so maybe I'll post them down here:
"My days of exploration have past" - should be "passed"
"I have a heir" - should be "an heir"
and a couple more spoily ones:
"Gnzbgu-ineryra jvyy or gur svefg planv-gvy" - V guvax planv-gvy zrnaf svefg dhrra, fb vg'f vapbeerpg gb nyfb unir gur Ratyvfu jbeq svefg urer
"Rngf znfprg Cynlf jvgu vgf ivpgvz" - zvffvat n crevbq / shyy fgbc orgjrra gurfr gjb fragraprf