Me and the Twitch chat were rivetted, there's an audience for this for sure. the writing is top notch, if i had any critique the narrative device of the messages on the screens was a little hard to comprehend at first, being able to look back through a log book might help those moments when i got a little lost, i think i only noticed 1 spelling error, and otherwise all four characters felt nice and disctinct, and their representation of four aspects of grief was a really nice touch c: