is Vile, vial and santuary, sanctuary? Beyond that... I love the very wholesome lead into bondage. And also how in character Rachel messed up Ladder and Latter.
Definitely sanctuary is correct I'll have to look for that one to change it, and I'll check to make sure I meant Vile instead of vial and if not change that too. Thanks for catching those! I thought I was thorough, but this is why it's a demo I suppose! Thanks, and glad you like it so far!