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Hi ! Thank you for leaving feedbacks !  It's always nice to read about people point of view ! I'm really happy you enjoyed it.

I love Styx so I'm happy he is getting some well deserved love hehe. 

First, The story should have been spicier but I toned it down because of recent issue with Itch on adult content and to avoid getting banned in some countries on Steam !  I undestand how it wasn't enough though ! 

As for the knight I understand you see it as a con ! I could maybe have improved things a bit but I wanted to express how the reasons behind their behavior is what make them an antagonist. knight is heavily implied being a serial rapist abusing his power while Styx while violent is acting out of fear and survival instinct. He never acted out of pure malice. While it doesn't make him innocent in any way Pomme could relate to this because she felt the same way as he did when she faced the knight that's why she forgave him more easily. The issue is probably my writing but I wanted to express my feeling while writing better in hope that it would bring you a new light on the story.

In any way I'll do my best to improve. in the meantime thank you for you support once again it means a lot