To let you know there is an error in your code for 017.rpy line 292.
'if metCindralith == "Sex":', will never trigger because you had that variable changed to "Sex, unconvinced" or "Sex, convinced" in 016.rpy lines 1465 to 1498.
You would have to change it to something like, 'if metCindralith[:3] == "Sex":', which will get the first three characters of the variable.