I'm deeply enjoying this game. I love the art style, the sound design and the pacing of the story so far. The animations startled me in the best way possible and I'm really looking forward to seeing where this will go from here in my playthrough. One big problem I'm having though is punctuation and syntax. A lot of the lines are missing periods at the end, a lot are missing capitalisation at the beginning of sentences... stuff like that. I enjoy what the actual lines are saying but these errors are pulling me out of the dark and thoughtful atmosphere you've managed to build and make it difficult to continue. That and some of the audio tracks are pretty short so I can hear them looping in some sections. I really love this game and where I've managed to play so far but proofreading and making sure the spelling/syntax of this game is the best it can be would take it to an even better level. Good luck and thank you for releasing such an intriguing project!