Just played through it, and it was a fun little story. I still need to replay the other POV sections, but it was a pretty sweet story.
The character of Milo confused me, though. Not that they're seemingly non-binary, but Milo isn't exactly a girl's name, and then they end up with Q, who apparently is gay? And yet Lawrence was never freaking out while dating them, so they have to be feminine in some way, right? Plus, Vale kept calling them "boss" and I don't remember a part explaining how the two of them met or why V calls them such.