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loopybarbie3 days ago (2 edits) (+1)(-1)

since the dev can't handle criticism, the reason i said it was lesbophobic is because the plot could've easily worked with a bi character who had a toxic male ex bf but faces biphobia for dating a woman. making both the MC's ex and the female li crazy was...a choice. all the nice characters in the story are straight or bi and all the lesbians are bad people

i highly recommend the writer look at https://www.josiewrites.com/blog/2020/10/02/tropes-to-avoid-when-writing-lesbian... because both the tempory lesbian and the "crazy" lesbian trope show up in this game

tenshideve3 days ago (4 edits) (+2)(-1)

I'm sorry that was your interpretation of the story and characters. Please note that while I do not consider any of the characters in my story inherently bad people, I also do not consider your criticism or interpretation invalid in any way.

I made Ayla go from dating a woman to dating a man because that reflected the biphobia I personally saw on my own social media. I felt like if I had her go from dating a man to dating a woman, the discrimination she encounters would be homophobia and not specifically biphobia. (It could definitely be my lack of skill as a writer that I cannot come up with a way to make it about biphobia if it was this order!)

I talk a bit more about this here, if you scroll to Writing.

As for the interpretation that all the lesbians in Community Notes are bad people—I'd like to clarify that so far in the demo, the only character whose sexuality is confirmed to be a lesbian is Romy.

loopybarbie3 days ago(-2)

"The only character whose sexuality is confirmed to be a lesbian is Romy" okay ill give you the benefit of the doubt that cheri will conveniently come out as bi later in the story. what about all the users with femme and butch in their usernames in the social media part? the only thing your dev log confirmed for me was my suspicion you are indeed bisexual and dating a man and of course you would write the male li to be the savior and rational one

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