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A neat story filled with plenty of violence and disturbing visuals (in particular, building a bear trap from the spine and ribs of your beheaded corpse... yikes). It's also a cool little twist that the crash actually caused, not the cloning machine, but the AI to malfunction. And finally, an interesting cliffhanger ending where John is accidentally revived and vows to take his revenge (it'll be cool to see if this is continued, but I think it also works as an open ending).

One thing I am a little confused about is the "defective clone". I could have just missed it, but is it every actually explained what it was, or why the AI needed John to kill it? Was it just like, an invading alien or something? Aside from this minor confusion, I still enjoyed the story a lot! Great book!

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Thank you so much for reading my story. for your question it wasn't said directly but I tried hinting at the AI creating the defective clone for its own amusement; that's why when the AI was talking about John winning a game before it kills him.  The defective clone was just some thing the AI made to entertain it self in a dark way. And a fun thing that I didn't really mention in the story was that the AI had some control over the defective clone. And for the ending I was originally going to just have him die in space but I thought it was boring and just not a good ending, so I made the open ended one instead . I hope this cleared up some confusion.

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I see, that makes sense (especially with the AI talking about John was "never supposed to win"). Thank you for the clarification!