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CONGRATZ ON THE NEW DEMO!! 🎉🎉 I finally have the time to post a review of the new demo, OMG 😵‍💫😵‍💫 And it’s GOOD!!! We finally have a gallery and inventory!!!! And profiles!!!!!! YAY I’ll add some spaces to avoid spoilers!!! 😁

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  • WHAT?! HE HAS A FIANCÉ?! it’s incredible how much of a big surprise this was when compared to magic and all, hahaha 😁😁 even kotori was like EXCUSE ME?!! XD and more surprising, it was the woman he had just met before!! 🫢
  • Kotori and Kazuya hugging 💕💕💕 🥹🥹 the way Kazuya cares so much for Kotori omg, they are SO precious together, so cute <3333333
  • MINORU’S BEAUTIFUL FACE, OMG. even Kotori kept mentioning how beautiful his face is LMAO XD every time he saw Minoru he kept blushing omg?!!!! XD
  • What could’ve happened to Kotori’s parents??? 🤔🤔 according to Sarina, they weren’t really good people but…. still, Minoru doesn’t seem good either in that memory 🤔….
  • it’s interesting to know that Sarina and Minoru don’t actually get 100% along. it’s like Sarina refrains so much from speaking what she really thinks when Minoru is there. but she still manages to express her discomfort!!
  • really nice detail that the CGs changed depending on Kotori’s clothes! 👍🏽
  • The gallery takes a bit of time to load! i think it has to do with so many images loading in one page? Maybe instead of scrolling for more images, they could be separate in pages? 🤔
  • I had NO idea the Journal was right there next to the texbox!!! I only noticed it when I had finished the demo Xd I thought it was part of the design and not something I could actually click on it? Maybe there’s a way to highlight it a bit more, to make it stand-out? Just a suggestion! 😁
  • I found a bug! During the choice section to choose which outfit Kotori can wear, the pop-up box that appears when you hover the words “pawlonian emblem” keeps appearing when you go to the game menu (all screens! preferences, save/load, help, etc.) if you hover the area where the words are. I can post it on the discord if you want! 😁

The writing is so exquisite, omg!! Sometimes I want to frame in a picture some passages because I REALLY like them!! This game is definitely something that you need to take your time while reading it. I wouldn’t recommend anyone to rush it. You have to take your time and go slow and enjoy it on a free afternoon, or take short breaks here and there. That’s what I did because I was busy with other things too, haha;;; 😵‍💫😵‍💫 But it’s definitely worth it!! ^^

AND AGAIN, CONGRATZ ON THE NEW DEMO!!!!! 🎉🎉🥳

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thank you again for another long comment! We're so glad you enjoyed it!😀And you noticed so many details teehee~

About the gallery, yes we're planning to separate cgs into different pages in the full version!

We thought about the Journal icon, about if we should make it more obvious (it actually jumps a bit when you unlock something new), but eventually we decided to hide it there so that it doesn't affect other visual effects on the screen.

About the "pawlonian emblem" bug, yes please post in the Discord channel, better with some sceenshots and descriptions about what you did before triggerting the bug, thank you!🥰