Hi!! i wanted to try out Act 2 but i didn’t want to be confused, so i decided to play Act 1 to understand the storyline :o!
the good thingssssss:
- i love this vintage shoujo manga art style! it just makes me feel like i’m reading an actual shoujo manga from many many years ago! i honestly love it! ^^ and i think it fits the story as well!!!
- i love the dialogues!!! the conversation between characters are really so sweet and it does make you care for them ; v ;
- the power of friendshipppppp!!!!! i’m sorry i just love how everyone care about each other <3 especially knowing this-important-thing about you-know-who 😞😓
- i like how the protagonist really do care about his clients and his friends and i understand why people feel comfy with him talking about their feelings c:
- i really like how in the beginning it’s not really clear if he’s really a vampire or just playing the act of being vampire (like a dom with a vampire setting). but then i realized that he can be both :p
- and yes! it was a good thing that i read this Act first. i don’t think i would’ve understand Act 2 without this previous context xD
now, here are some things that i believe could be improved:
- i think this is a bit obvious but….it really was a trouble having to download the game from an external site 😵😔 usually, people don’t download games from an external site because it’s suspicious! it may be a virus! fortunately, this did not happen with this game ^^! but i STRONGELY suggest you to make the game available for download here on itchio itself! i know there’s a 1GB limit here but i believe that if you decide to do this change, it’ll become easier for ppl to play the game and it’ll give players a sense of security as well :D
- i know it’s a kinetic novel but……i felt like you could use more the visuals of the game. at certain points, it felt as if the images didn’t help the dialogues between characters. like, the conversation is interesting but then i looked at the characters and they were just standing there…. like, i feel like the visuals should help the story and not be left out of the narrative c:
- i’m not sure if this is a bug but when i tried to save, it only saved the date and hour of the game, but no screenshot :S
- the font-type of the story wasn’t really that much of my liking :c maybe this is just me but it was a bit of pain reading with this font-type 😟 still, i could read it all but i had to get my eyes used to it at first xP
i think these are all my suggestions ^^
overall, i liked this game!! ^^ it left me with a sense of being cared and listened when you see how everyone treat each other <3 and to see how Val treats with care people around him, it’s nice seeing this <3
i think that is all! byeeeee ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ