Still going 2020 NaNoRenOs and was pleasantly surprised I still had good ones to read. Liked the economic writing that keeps the story and action moving, fitting artstyle, and a fitting soundtrack with good variety. I appreciated both endings and how the bad end plays with the title. My only suggestions/personal preferences are cosmetic: different font, color-coded nametags, All in all, great work and I look forward to future endeavors!