An interesting take on the classic "monster in a spaceship" tale. Leaves you hanging with the anticipation of how John will enact his revenge. It could benefit from some more clarity about the AI's actions, which honestly feel kind of random. But there's the potential for a really great space horror story in there.
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The Ai was suppose to be kind of weird since it was insane but I didn't want John or the reader to really know that until the end, but yeah I probably should have thought about that. Thank you for rating or just reading my story that I based of my own horror video game idea. I'll take all your criticisms in mind for my next project.