oooooooh wow what a spectacular comment. thanks so much for taking the time to check it out!! gosh.
i spent such a long time on this project (and learning twine) that act 2 is pretty significantly different from act 1, which thankfully sort of manifested in a smooth progression of complexity but yes, having that level of quality all the way through would have been nice. looking back, i really should have done more in the first act especially, but i was determined to release it as a finished project in november, and a number of scenes - even ones that were partially done - just had to go.
also i'm really glad you liked the lizard shaman guy. i think he's my personal favorite deep down!! lenti and oliver bumping into sir griffin again and betraying each other to him would have been SO fucking good oh my god. maybe something for the increasingly-less-vague idea of a future expansion.
a renpy version would be pretty amazing!! and i do think there's a pretty significant chunk of players who see twine (regardless of all the effort i put into visual polish) and close the tab, but gosh, my limited experience working on visual novel projects has made me realize that even my most conservative ideations of art assets is an absurd amount of work that would ALL have to be outsourced. maybe one day!! but probably not for shallowcreek.
thanks so much for playing!! i can't easily express how excited i was to see a comment with your name on it and i'm really happy to hear you liked it enough to play it to the end!!