I enjoy the update but in the case of the relationship between Della and MC. The MC is young and as my old friend's dad said likes to spread his oats. It's also possible he just likes more than one person opening up a harem route if you want. Not only that but it's possible for the MC to just fall more for someone else. Personally, I would be irked with loose lips considering how her mentor shows up. The point system could work through selective coding which would be a lot of hassle while the flag system could work for the most part except if the story goes really long then that's a lot of flags. I don't think a hybrid of the two would be a good idea but in the end it's what best suits you so have fun with that. The anxious feeling is most likely from inexperience which would improve the longer you continue. Really it doesn't really matter what other people think as long as you feel you put out something good while keeping in mind your audience which unless the story gets way to deluded or you grow in a different way should be supportive but that's just my current thoughts
Thank you for the long feedback :) I am so happy whenever I got a feedback like this hehe.
And just like you've said, our MC is still young, and he will definitely fall in love with someone else. But this is the start, and I kinda want player to see and understand why he still look for "love" when he already have her who's been with him for a long time. I want player to understand why he love her, yet feels like something is missing. But the most important part is that I want you as a player to feel connected with the MC. And that will be my main focus on Episode 1. Emotions and feeling will be a huge parts of this game, and what happen in Eps 1 will be the foundation of it all.
And yeah, hopefully with more update these anxious feelings will disappear lol xD Also, thank you so much for your support and feedback! I'll contact you more when I move into the testing phase :)