Yours is definitely a strong entry. Very fleshed out, cosy and sweet. Beautiful art style. Basically all that's already been said in the comments below.
Personally, I’m not much of a fan of cosy games or long flowery text. For an RPG, the text-heaviness-to-player-agency ratio was a bit too tilted towards text for my liking.
Though I might not be the target audience, I have to say: If not already, I hope your writer decides to do it professionally. You are truly talented / skilled. The way you give each character its own personality and manage to stick to it throughout the dialogues is prolific. Even through the richness of the text with those little flowery words, you deliberately give the forest its own character and sort of rythm. Magical.
Wonderful work from everybody involved!