Love me a time travel story, even though this one doesn't get much into the ramifications of the travel, lol. But the ambiance of the lab and the team were palpable, you can get a good feel for how all the characters relate to one another. The time travel scene itself was very tense; the descriptions of the character's sensations were really vivid, I could really feel myself in there. The text itself can improve somewhat, but that's part of the journey. Nice entry!