Okay so I have binge read the entire thing kinda wish there was more than just vore teasing but oh well love the story so far just one Minor thing that irks me, in chapter 8 you are thinking about treats to get and are super worried about chocolate being poisonous to him/her when you already had s'mores with them in an earlier chapter meaning you gave them chocolate and know they can have it. Just a small thing that stuck with me but other than that I love the story and will definitely be reading further updates as soon as they are released.
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Holy shit, how did I miss that!? As a fellow reader, the only way I could think that makes sense is that the MC is under a lot of stress and is having a lot of new and bizarre things thrown at him all at once. Having him think about it only after the fact could be an easy fix. Like " oh shoot dogs can't have chocolate! Can Timber have chocolate!? Oh no I'll have to be more careful in the future and maybe ask Timber about it." Or something like that. You get the idea.