Cute story and ambiance. I if possible I would say an improvement would be to be able to click on the dialogue while it's typing out to quick fill rather than moving on before it finishes, don't let the next button be hit while it's typing, or a button to go back to previous in case you do skip some lines. This is a good framework though!

I really really wish that you could skip the text typing animation without skiping to the next textbox altogether. So it should be like when text is still typing out, you click -> you instantly get to the state where all text is on screen and stays that way. From this state, you click again -> the next textbox starts typing; this is how it usually works basically in every dialogue system, so it was kinda frustrating to click and just miss a piece of text. The story itself is cute, although feels kinda rushed

cute and wholesome, but not my vibe

The game is raw but I still enjoyed that! I think if you keep developing this it can be a quite sweet VN with bondage themes!

it's very cool that this game has English and Spanish dialogue, seems like Fiona in her inner dialogue refers to Angie with both she and his pronouns. With these first parts of the story Angie and her cameras seem awfully suspicious. Are you planning to finish working on this for the The NSFW Jam?