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Nice entry! I think you've got some cool ideas in here, but there was too much intro upfront (some of which I missed because of UI layout issues) and not enough action for me when I got into the game itself. There were definitely other bugs and things as others have pointed out, but rather than reiterate those I'd encourage you to keep going and think about how you can be more focused for your next game. If you have fewer components or systems in your jams, you'll have less bugs for sure and you'll get a chance to dig in deep to learn how to polish those and make for an overall better experience. Over time, learning how to master fewer things at a time means you'll have built up skills to master bigger and more comprehensive projects with lots of systems. Really great job for your first game—thanks for making and sharing it!

Thank you for your compliments and stating out what is needed to be in work. I really am greatful to you for playing my game and make sure you share it with your friends (●’◡’●).