Oh - HAI I’m back! :D
And - WOW: Look at YOU, completing an Entire ACT! 🥳 I thought I’d wait until you got further along since it’s painful for me having to start over each time I play a game - esp once further in (Zero blame there -- I know you’re constantly updating your work and that’s incredibly important). Re-reading this from the beginning just made me appreciate + realize — your: poignant writing all over again. It really is so Breathtaking.... But -! on to thinky thoughts/comments!
…it’s Funny! I never noticed: when the tent explodes in the first part from the (DUM DUM DUUUM)Stalking Presence — the porcelain tea set shatters! And later on, Farah breaks it! Was this dream also telling the future since MC has that power? If so: WELL *DONE*. Very Clever~
Oh my Goodness - I LOVED meeting my mother - SO MUCH?? Like, that TALK at the end with the story and how she got — REALEST. And my MC - freaking the Fuzz out: Delicious. 10/10.
I really Adore complicated relationships with more (- seemingly)’nicer’ choices, so I chose being close to Moh-ver, and the underlying Tension there — even *IF* forgiven + how Phoebe clearly does not forgive *Herself* for who she had to sculpt her child to be to come back alive - - OOF~ Eating it with a SPOON. Your characters CONTINUE to be so friggin multifaceted and Spectacularly written/fleshed out. And that's - - Impressive, given there's so many (and many MORE) at this point. It makes me so excited to meet more ROs; but also to see this new country and their people in Act Dos.
(HOW???)You continue to be Amazing at - F-ing me All the way up with: Gory ass descriptions of my dead siblings whom I—CANNOT SAVE
I’m not mad at how it *Hits* — but - ow. OW, OKAY
Can I just love Aurora and the rest without my MC getting beaten to near-death? ...No? *le siiiigh* lol
I cried at Nour’s Death vision. You wrote that Phenomenally; truly - one of my fav scenes in the Act. I teared up and my throat Burned. Seeing my aloof, dignified MC baby (who - Cares so MUCH) — snap… be Called out by Luca, who *KNOWS* her…. Wow. Heavy. Heavy-gorgeous. And I can’t help but appreciate how you - -Let us craft this character that's so stunningly complex. So very.... human.
Like - GAAAWD - she’s so STRONG and IMPERIOUS AND - - SAAAD
(P.S. you're Evil for making us have to break a promise to Farah - AGAIN)But, we SAVED Nour -- and I LOVED that.
You probably don't remember, but I mentioned being suuuper interested in seeing how Kieran turns out, as I'd find a romance with them + Samira to be REALLY interesting, dynamic-wise. So, very much excited for this new act; Equally for the romance and plot. Honestly have no notes: Keep flowing~ You're doing Incredible work. ❤️