Congrats on completing the jam! The art is cute and all the visual elements work really well together.
For a bit of critique, the way the text was setup made it difficult to read. The typing effect is fine, but it would have been better if the paragraph was anchored instead of readjusting based on how much of the text was revealed. There's also a bit of dependence on telling the story through text, so that kind of suffered because of the text speed.
The transition to the gameplay itself was also a tad long. I thought that I could start clicking, but the transition was still active.
But all in all, good job, and good luck on the jam!