Awesome entry you two!! My first play through I clicked the funniest dialogue option and was promptly fired and banned for life from the train lol, but I enjoyed the whole thing so much that I re-played it to get the A+ ranking. The music/sfx fit perfectly (loved the train rumbling on tracks sound), the artstyle is unique and lovely, and the writing is genuinely great; I loved everything.
The characters all have their own personality that shines through in the dialogue. I'm not usually a big fan of visual novels but the writing is great and the characters feel alive, so this one worked great for me. "Boss makes a dollar, and I make a dime, that's why I'm a bug on company time" hahahah. Also shout out Icicle Jones for the sage yeti-wife wisdom, I can offer the reader the same advice for Bigfoot women (don't ask). Having the characters be revealed more (silouhette, name, etc) as the dialogue progressed was a really nice touch too.
Keep up the great work team!