Very touching and interesting read. I think the balance of writing a struggling relationship in limbo was done remarkably well, it felt very real on all sides.
I'd also like to complement the art and the wonderful atmosphere that was built within this story. I don't really have anything to say about the first, I mean, just look at it all. Gorgeous. With the latter, I've noticed that the atmosphere a vn builds is a very important aspect of it to me. When it's done well, it's a sign that the writing, visuals, and sound are working together to make something that has feeling and is tangible in that way, and I think that it was done incredibly well here.
Bravo! I'm excited to see more from you if you choose to do so!