Really great. Your layout work is a treat to look at. Got a little confused trying to read the first page—the section about procurement should probably be at the bottom right somewhere, rather than crammed into the top left. Tripped me up.
Still, absolutely gorgeous! I love how saturated and colorful each page is. You clearly put a lot of care into the way things look, and it shows. The maximalist graphic design style gives my eyes plenty to look at. In terms of raw sensory enjoyment, the first page is my favorite to look at, just because it crams in so much detail while also maintaining a solid visual cohesion. The second page suffers a bit on the visual cohesion front, but the third page is good. I also have to echo the sentiment about the red line running through each page. Awesome detail.
Oh, and your cover is BREATHTAKING.
It's very easy to imagine how I'd play Colonel Kraken, but I think in a perfect world I'd want a little more to go off of for Johnny and the pirates. Same with the NRL research priorities. I could certainly work with the details provided, but it'd be nice to be given more of a solid base for what each one is meant to be, and what their labs look like.
Lots of fun mechanics. Great job with this!