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Just caught up and I'm digging it a lot so far! It really felt like things were getting good where it left off with how the details started to slot together in such a satisfying way. Scenes like that last one and the space walk were incredibly well done, kudos!

A note I do have is that a pass to catch some grammatical errors and typos should probably be done at some point. It's been a couple weeks since I read the start so I could be wrong but I believe I especially noticed some mix up of "passed" and "past" early on. But other than that and the few odd typos there isn't anything crazy I noticed, just something that stood out to me because I have an editor's spirit.

Anyway, with all of that being said I am Anita Everett's #1 fan, I love her a lot and I will be waiting with bated breath to see her again <3

For sure. I always get those two confused, haha. I’m hoping to re-obtain a fresh set of eyes (or better yet, another set) to go over the entire script with a fine-tooth comb.

Glad to hear you’re enjoying it! Thanks :)