It's been a long time since I haven't meet a game that really made me want to go and see every ending, every change, and honestly I loved this project! But
SPOILER ALERT FOR WHOEVER
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I really, really adored the way the 4th wall breaks with the images of the "hacker" which, I suppose, is trying to take us apart while Elijah is away, the whole drama and how you all narrate and explain what is loss, change, the difference between fiction and reality in the game's world, every concept was great and I really tried a lot of options until I unlocked every ending.
Still, I think there was more to exploit about the "hacker". While it's explained what their intention was and we can guess it could be Elijah (or that he surely is), in my personal opinion, the few or little interactions apart from the screamers was just this person just trying to convince us to go with him, and it didn't made me fully interested in that specific part.
At this point I've played a lot of yandere themed games,I've seen a lot of different plots and somehow feel like that part could have more to include. We know his name, we know his intentions, but the "bad endings" could have shown more about the hacker itself.
Still, is just a personal opinion and besides that, I think y'all did a wonderful job! Hope I can see more in the future, following now!